Diary in English♡August 8th It's not my day :( なんてついてない日！

Diary in English♡August 8th

It's not my day today :(
First, I got a call from a bank which I had saved money in this morning. I am in the middle of cancelling the saving and withdrawal procedures and something happened to it. The banker told me the signet which I stamped on a paper was wrong. I realized my mistake and I have to complete the paper again.
Second, a heavy shower began as soon as I left the house on my bike to go to the dentist's office nearby. I had to get a letter of introduction to have my wisdom tooth extracted. I got soaked through in the rain and I felt very embarrassed. Then I returned home once and took my wet clothes off and put another clothes on and dried my hair with a blower. I wasted time that I didn't expect to, so I had no time to eat lunch! Then I went to an another dentist with who I made an appointment yesterday. I made an appointment at 2:30 pm, but I had to wait my turn and could only finally see a doctor at 3:15 pm!
The third happened this evening. When I opened the window of balcony, suddenly a cicada flew into our living room. I was way too scared because I really hate cicadas! My mother and I tried to catch it with trash box and we did it! We set it free outside.
Then I wanted to take a shower but a light bulb in the bathroom went out. Oh my. What a day today. It's not my day!

Thank you for your corrections Alexander on italki :)

新しい単語＆表現

I got soaked through in the rain　雨でびしょ濡れ

cicada　蝉

light bulb　電球

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It's not my day today :(
First, I got a call from a bank which I have been saved money this morning. I am in the middle of the cancel the saving and withdrawal procedures and something happened about it. The banker told me the signet which I stamped on a paper was wrong. I realized my mistake and I have to make the paper again.
Second, I had a heavy shower as soon as I went out and rode a bike to go to the dentist's office near my house. I had to get a letter of introduction to have my wisdom tooth extracted. I got soaked through in the rain and I felt very embarrassed. Then I returned home once and took my wet clothes off and put another clothes on and then dried my hair with a blower. I wasted the time I didn't expected so I had no time to eat lunch! Then I went to an another dentist I made an appointment yesterday. I made an appointment at 2:30 pm, but I had to wait my turn and finally could see a doctor at 3:15 pm!
Third, it happened this evening. When I opened the window of balcony, suddenly a cicada flied into our living room. I was way too scared because I really hate it! My mother and I tried to catch it with trash box and we did it! We let it free out side.
Then I wanted to take a shower but a light bulb of bathroom went out. Oh my. What a day today. It's not my day!